Line editing insights on a passage
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Train the lens in closely
Looking to get a taste of what fine-level sentence work amounts to? Looking for feedback on your writing style, your writerly voice, at a fraction of what the work could otherwise cost? A careful line edit of a short excerpt from a longer work can give you all that and more, for pennies a word. A modest investment in cost, a deep investment in your work.
This is close-in sentence work. Not an evaluation of the overall structure or trajectory.
Informational nonfiction
With a particular focus on cohesion, local coherence, clarity, sentence construction, voice, and so on
500 words, $100
1,000 words, $150
Narrative nonfiction / cnf
With a particular focus on artistry and technique, immersion, narrative design, and so on
1,000 words, $200
2,000 words, $350
Fiction
With a particular focus on narrative technique applied at the line level
1,000 words, $200
2,000 words, $350
What you get
The selected passage with close line work and detailed comments
“Write. Rewrite. When not writing or rewriting, read. ”